http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/ 7thSea-Story-Archive Tue, 13 Apr 2004 01:14:05 GMT leam http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/166 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/166 To answer, in some degree, the request for more detail in combat scenes. http://reuel.net/game/7thC/breath.html ciao! leam Mon, 08 Mar 2004 10:26:40 GMT Martin Hall http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/165 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/165 ... Heck, that's what I do. And it certainly isn't because I can't write a fight or anything. M Mon, 08 Mar 2004 07:51:35 GMT Kenneth Williams http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/164 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/164 It is to be remembered that grammer is a tool, much as a hammer is a tool, and while a hammer's intended purpose may be to drive nails into wood, if it Sat, 06 Mar 2004 00:09:28 GMT leam http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/163 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/163 ... Yes grammer... leam _______________________________________________ 7thsea-story mailing list 7thsea-story@... Sat, 06 Mar 2004 00:05:58 GMT Deryabar1@... http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/162 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/162 The one thing I would say to all writers is to watch tense shifts and pronoun references. Although it is common to combine past tense + participle, it's Fri, 05 Mar 2004 23:52:10 GMT Deryabar1@... http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/161 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/161 In a message dated 3/5/2004 12:32:33 PM Pacific Standard Time, dana@... writes: in general, fight scenes should always be more detailed. Unless, of Fri, 05 Mar 2004 21:12:47 GMT leam http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/160 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/160 ... That's what I'm working on, the next story should be new and it will will be an attempt to just work on the style of a fight scene. I'm just fishing for Fri, 05 Mar 2004 20:32:47 GMT Dana DeVries http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/159 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/159 tough to say on the last one, since the combat was retold to a child. in general, fight scenes should always be more detailed. ... Fri, 05 Mar 2004 17:56:30 GMT leam http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/158 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/158 One constructive criticism I've recieved is that my fight scenes could use more detail. Any suggestions you'd like to see in a fight scene? ciao! leam -- Fri, 05 Mar 2004 00:06:03 GMT leam http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/157 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/157 http://reuel.net/game/7thC/hero_drachen.html A different sort of work. ciao! leam _______________________________________________ 7thsea-story mailing list Thu, 12 Feb 2004 10:37:59 GMT leam http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/156 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/156 http://www.reuel.net/game/7thC/cecilia.html This is a continuation of (http://www.reuel.net/game/7thC/supper_table.html) and puts our Vaganti in the position Sat, 31 Jan 2004 23:46:16 GMT leam http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/155 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/155 Quick background. Diego was in Stahlfort and met Miguel the pig-farmer. They adventured to slay a drachen, and later Diego goes to visit Miguels' family after Wed, 17 Dec 2003 03:11:55 GMT "Vladimir Krylov" http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/154 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/154 For me no problems itself to think up a history...;) But as I am very well familiar with a history of Russia I think could be very useful for development of Mon, 15 Dec 2003 21:42:40 GMT Rick Horvath http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/153 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/153 ... Over at the Temple of the Rose and Cross, they got maps. Really easy to use, too. Just click on maps in the menu. Mon, 15 Dec 2003 21:40:20 GMT Rick Horvath http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/152 http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/7thSea-Story-Archive/message/152 ... I object to the use of the word "evil". They certainly tricked her, and it infuriated her to no end, but she did offer the boy a present of the parents'