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Re: May I have your opinion

The Dragon — Sat, 10 May 2008 17:13:53 GMT

I think you have a great story idea, but how you're starting it isn't good. Launching straight into a long narrative like that without any kind of scene

Re: May I have your opinion

Drack silver — Sat, 10 May 2008 05:50:17 GMT

It captured me right away. I love the Zelda games. What I was saying was that you should separate the story that the mother tells and the actual story. It

Re: May I have your opinion

rebekah purdy — Fri, 09 May 2008 22:56:00 GMT

but it only has three characters(ma, pa and roran) and thought they are important only one plays continuous role through out the book. I dont .... hmm... i

Re: May I have your opinion

rebekah purdy — Fri, 09 May 2008 22:46:46 GMT

Well, the ocarina and the stones all have something to do with the story and all items appear later in the book. In the book you would need the ocarina to

Re: May I have your opinion

Drack silver — Fri, 09 May 2008 17:31:01 GMT

I think that you should separate the story and the information about Ocarina of Time separate. It would help to define the line between the story and the book.

Re: May I have your opinion

ladysocrates12 — Fri, 09 May 2008 06:32:11 GMT

As a reader, I have to say, the page have too many keywords in it..too many important information. The text need more elaboration for each events/ situation.

May I have your opinion

Rebekah Purdy — Fri, 09 May 2008 01:56:16 GMT

I would like to know what you think of the first part of my unfinished 103 page book. Here it is: The Legacy "299 years ago, Link, the hero of time, destroyed

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Sun, 04 May 2008 09:51:43 GMT

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Re: Files

Drack silver — Thu, 24 Apr 2008 05:13:21 GMT

Awesome!

Files

shininggreendragon — Thu, 24 Apr 2008 05:11:07 GMT

Okay, everybody. I have the first 20 pages of Deusah in the files, broken into 10-page files for easier loading. I have another 5 written, but I don't want to

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Sun, 20 Apr 2008 10:29:47 GMT

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Re: Deusah

The Dragon — Mon, 14 Apr 2008 03:07:08 GMT

I don't recall as I sent the story to you, Mike. But we're referring to a novel I am currently working on, thusfar called 'Deusah'. That may, or may not, be

Re: Deusah

mike giulian — Sun, 13 Apr 2008 05:43:50 GMT

please refresh me what is the book or movie your talking about Drack silver wrote: I'd love to keep reading, but

Re: Deusah

Drack silver — Sun, 13 Apr 2008 04:02:22 GMT

I'd love to keep reading, but unfortunately I don't remember was either. If I have to make a guess it would be after the part were the humans get to the island

Deusah

shininggreendragon — Thu, 10 Apr 2008 18:22:45 GMT

I have shared this story with some of you already ... but I don't remember who was how far in the story. I have some more of it done, if ya'll want to read