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Re: Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 14a)

Frank Murdock — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 00:11:37 GMT

Cool. Will love triumph over greed.... ? Sure hope not. :J /FM ... From: ddswanson To: ShazamEarthSliveson@yahoogroups.com Sent: Monday, November 09, 2009 4:03

Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 14a)

ddswanson — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 00:03:15 GMT

Aleny was still conflicted as she headed to Wayland's shop the next morning. He had told her that her car was ready and he wanted her to take a test drive to

Re: Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 13)

ddswanson — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 12:47:30 GMT

If she didn't rob, I wouldn't have a story to write... she was kind of unthinking about the guard, wasn't she? She hasn't really had a chance to 'calibrate'

Re: Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 13)

ddswanson — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 12:40:35 GMT

I think it was Harvey who said 'you can read my characters dialog without laughing' or something like that. In every fight I've been in (which is not a big

Re: Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 13)

Frank Murdock — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 12:21:03 GMT

Pretty nifty fight scene, especially when Night Sentry hits the desk and rebounds with his spring-boots. Another great spot is where Zing makes the comment

Re: Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 13)

dave barnowski — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 05:01:21 GMT

good tale, sad tale. sad that she has to rob and cause so much destruction. And what about the unconscious security guard, what kind of shape is he in. It'll

Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 13)

ddswanson — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 00:42:10 GMT

As soon as he saw the figure in front of the safe, Night Sentry silently removed two items from his utility belt. One looked like a painter's respirator mask

Re: Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 12)

ddswanson — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 01:41:09 GMT

Thanks. That was easier than writing the action scenes.

Re: Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 12)

dave barnowski — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 21:43:52 GMT

And the rematch is on. Dave ... From: ddswanson Subject: [Shazam Earth S Lives on] Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 12)

Re: Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 12)

Frank Murdock — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 20:47:07 GMT

Cool. My favorite part is that very first paragraph. That is some great descriptive language there, Dan. Simple and yet deep. Very nice job. /FM ... From:

Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 12)

ddswanson — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 20:42:00 GMT

Aleny's relationship with Wayland was starting to cause her some confusion and self-doubt. Why was she even considering getting a job and working for a

Re: Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 11)

The Time Trust — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 18:16:06 GMT

Interesting. I like this part of a "secret origin" for Wayland/Night Sentry. Cheers, Doc Quantum of The Time Trust ... instinctively working it into his

Re: Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 11)

dave barnowski — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 15:38:16 GMT

I really like the way this tale is moving along Dan. Dave ... From: ddswanson Subject: [Shazam Earth S Lives on] Zing, Queen of Quick

Re: Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 11)

Frank Murdock — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 10:53:34 GMT

Nice intermidiary, Dan. Especially enjoyed your tech-talk there with A. and her boss-to-be. /FM ... From: ddswanson To: ShazamEarthSliveson@yahoogroups.com

Zing, Queen of Quick in: Westward, Ho! (Chapter 11)

ddswanson — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 04:07:36 GMT

In late 1954, the Navy crewship 'C.C. Balloo' on which Wayland had been serving had been anchored near a small atoll in the Marshall Islands, and the captain