http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/ Fans of Captain Carrot & funny animals Mon, 02 Nov 2009 01:08:50 GMT Drivtaan http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2372 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2372 I was going to add an epilogue, but Dan said it didn't really need it. I'm glad I listened to him. And I'm glad you enjoyed it, Doc. Lee [Non-text portions of Mon, 02 Nov 2009 00:03:58 GMT The Time Trust http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2371 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2371 LOL! And now we know why it's a Halloween story. Good work, Drivtaan. BTW, I could easily picture this story as illustrated by Scott Shaw! or a lookalike Fri, 30 Oct 2009 17:17:41 GMT drivtaan http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2370 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2370 Part 8 While the hungry dogs (and one slightly peckish cat) scoured the slums, Granny Goatness, Glorious Goatfrey, Devillambs, and Deersaad made their way to Wed, 28 Oct 2009 22:12:13 GMT Drivtaan http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2369 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2369 Thanks, Doc. I almost forgot the world I was writing for and realized that I needed to lighten things up a bit. Lee [Non-text portions of this message have Wed, 28 Oct 2009 20:14:53 GMT The Time Trust http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2368 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2368 I really liked these last two chapters and the way you brought some fun into the mix. The bit about Barkseid smelling like a wet dog was good, as was the bit Wed, 28 Oct 2009 02:30:02 GMT drivtaan http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2367 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2367 Part 7 Glorious Goatfrey slowly raised a hoof. "We don't actually have any hungry dogs here at the Orphanage," he said. Granny Goatness glared at him. "Then Wed, 28 Oct 2009 02:26:32 GMT drivtaan http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2366 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2366 Part 6 Once they had left the Orphanage, the two escaped prisoners took to the air, constantly aware of the possibility of more parrotdaemons. OMAK relied, Mon, 26 Oct 2009 03:45:20 GMT drivtaan http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2365 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2365 Part 5 OMAK landed in another alley a few blocks away. He had only gone a little way when he heard the crowds murmuring excitedly. Immediately, he began to Mon, 26 Oct 2009 03:42:10 GMT drivtaan http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2364 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2364 Part 4 By the time Devillambs arrived, the Phantom Strange-hare was gone. Although Barkseid couldn't fathom the stranger's sense of honor, he knew his opponent Thu, 22 Oct 2009 18:33:41 GMT drivtaan http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2363 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2363 Part 3 Once on the street, OMAK paused just long enough to get his bearings and locate the fortress of this world's lord and master. There was no mistaking the Thu, 22 Oct 2009 04:28:19 GMT Drivtaan http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2362 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2362 Glad you are enjoying the story, so far, Doc. I do have plans for the hunger dogs, and OMAK's reasons for being here will be revealed. Eventually. Lee Thu, 22 Oct 2009 04:21:14 GMT The Time Trust http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2361 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2361 Interesting... I'm not sure how this ties in with the last chapter, but I'll keep reading. I like OMAK (One Moose Animal Kingdom), too. Cheers, Doc Quantum of Thu, 22 Oct 2009 04:12:53 GMT The Time Trust http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2360 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2360 Good beginning. I like the name Phantom Strange-hare and the spooky mood you're establishing. If I have one suggestion, it would be to mention the "hunger Wed, 21 Oct 2009 04:35:32 GMT drivtaan http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2359 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2359 Part 2 Several minutes earlier? The large, muscular moose stepped out of the glowing portal and into the dark alleyway. An instant before his passage to this Tue, 20 Oct 2009 20:00:21 GMT drivtaan http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2358 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZooCrewonEarthC/message/2358 Part 1 The universe is a coin with two sides, yet, unlike a coin with a head or a tail, the universe has a positive and a negative side. It is in the negative