http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/ Teenage Author Critique Group Tue, 27 Oct 2009 19:06:34 GMT http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1358 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1358 Hello, This email message is a notification to let you know that a file has been uploaded to the Files area of the teenageauthors group. File : Wed, 16 Sep 2009 19:59:50 GMT Helena http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1357 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1357 I've been trying to write a book for a long time. But all I can write is short stories because the action happens so quickly. I know I should slow down but I Thu, 10 Sep 2009 15:56:04 GMT Jill Williamson http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1356 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1356 Check this blog post out: http://www.stevelaube.com/book-manufacturing/ www.JillWilliamson.com author of By Darkness Hid (Blood of Kings, book 1) reviewer at Mon, 07 Sep 2009 17:26:36 GMT purplesparklypen http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1355 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1355 ... And thank you so much for your help! Sat, 05 Sep 2009 15:51:00 GMT Jill Williamson http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1354 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1354 It sounds like she has reason to be grouchy. I'd make it your goal to finish the book, then go back in and rewrite her dialogue to sound sarcastic and fun Thu, 03 Sep 2009 17:55:55 GMT purplesparklypen http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1353 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1353 ... I didn't mean for Draya to become so whiny. At first I thought she was just steeped with cynacism and overly sarcastic. The main plot to her story is that Wed, 02 Sep 2009 17:43:49 GMT Jill Williamson http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1352 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1352 What is your story goal for her? Having a story goal gives you a place to take her and a way to help her grow. Readers want to root for your protagonist, so Wed, 02 Sep 2009 17:41:56 GMT purplesparklypen http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1351 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1351 Hi, I was wondering what do you do when your protagonist is driving you crazy? I don;t want to delete the whole story, because it's over 200 pages of effort on Thu, 27 Aug 2009 04:13:08 GMT Jill Williamson http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1350 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1350 Hello!   Go to this link: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/files/ and about the middle of the page, to the far right there are some options. Thu, 27 Aug 2009 02:37:50 GMT cerenity cirrc http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1349 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1349 i dont really know exactly how to upload a chapter onto the group.. maybe you can be of help? thank you. Sat, 15 Aug 2009 19:00:26 GMT grant_bg http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1348 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1348 ... Evan used to be Emmet, thought I switched all of them, but I guess there are still a few out there! Thank you again, glad you like the characters! Thanks Sat, 15 Aug 2009 14:27:18 GMT purplesparklypen http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1347 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1347 Hi. You're story is excellent.You have a real way with words. I would advise you to read over it one more time though, as you did have a few spelling mistakes. Fri, 14 Aug 2009 14:34:37 GMT http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1346 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1346 Hello, This email message is a notification to let you know that a file has been uploaded to the Files area of the teenageauthors group. File : Fri, 14 Aug 2009 10:40:35 GMT http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1345 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1345 Hello, This email message is a notification to let you know that a file has been uploaded to the Files area of the teenageauthors group. File : Fri, 14 Aug 2009 10:00:30 GMT purplesparklypen http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1344 http://groups.yahoo.com/group/teenageauthors/message/1344 ... I was so nervous about posting it, and I Really appreciated the constructive criticism! :D I'm going to check out that site now, thanks for the link. I