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Re: Old Shoes 1410 words (39429 Dave)

dave_n2chi — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 15:49:01 GMT

Hi Wings, That is sad. I have never understood how two blood relatives could refuse to speak with one another over an untoward remark or even an action, save

Re: The Shadow

Jim Lamoreux — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 14:10:40 GMT

... I'll add your comments then for the class. Truth is I don't know much about 9/11 so I glossed over a lot of things. The task for the poem was to write a

Re: Old Shoes 1410 words (39429 Dave)

wings081 — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 11:58:16 GMT

Hi Dave Further to my earlier praise of your story, let me tell you why it struck a chord with me What follows is a fact which I only wish could be peacefully

Re: Old Shoes 1410 words

dave_n2chi — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 11:46:55 GMT

Thanks, Rod. Good catch. Dave

Re: The Shadow

dave_n2chi — Sat, 21 Nov 2009 10:23:14 GMT

Very moving, Jim. Heavy "grey storm clouds" was exactly what it looked like. The narrator here seems a good observer, but maybe a bit detached. I'd like to

Re: Old Shoes 1410 words (39424 Dave)

dave_n2chi — Sat, 21 Nov 2009 10:23:00 GMT

Thank you, Wings. I always wanted to write for radio, and would enjoy writing a script if I thought there was a possibility of it being performed. Amy,

Re: Old Shoes 1410 words

albiaicehouse — Sat, 21 Nov 2009 10:21:58 GMT

Dave, Thank you for a bittersweet story showing the power of forgiveness. One suggie: change: "and drew out a pair of new shoes." to "and drew out a pair of

The Shadow

Jim Lamoreux — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 22:24:45 GMT

The Shadow It was time for me to Go off shift. I was getting ready to go home When the call came in. I closed my locker And waited for more information. "Turn

Re: Old Shoes 1410 words

Amy Rissna Thompson — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 17:00:00 GMT

Dear Dave, I just finished reading your story, Old Shoes, and I thought it was very touching. I liked it and I think it’s almost perfect. I don’t see that

Re: Old Shoes 1410 words (39424 Dave)

wings081 — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 12:04:46 GMT

Hi Dave That was a well written piece which would go down nicely in an afternoon radio programme for the ladies.. You have done what I have advised writers to

Old Shoes 1410 words

dave_n2chi — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 11:25:05 GMT

Comments welcome! I'm about to give it one more look and edit. Thanks, Dave Old Shoes The postal lady brought the small wrapped box and tooted the mail

Re: Genealogy and knowing when to fold'em. (Krys 39421)

wings081 — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 15:13:37 GMT

Dear Krys Cornish Wreckers Further to my recent post about Cornish wreckers. During WW2 my late father-in law and his mates used to `salvage' flotsam which had

Re: Genealogy and knowing when to fold'em.(Krys 39421)

wings081 — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 11:00:35 GMT

Dear Krys Re. your ancestral cattle rustlers and riding wit Butch Cassidy. I would have milked that for all its worth when I was a schoolboy. Might even have

Re: Genealogy and knowing when to fold'em.

Krys DOUGLAS — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 09:10:02 GMT

Dear Wings, Regarding your swinging ancestor: As another of those infected with the genealogists' disease, I know well the saying that those who don't have a

Re: Rough draft, but please comment anyway

Van Gogh — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 09:07:52 GMT

I'm glad you said that. I was already thinking the same thing. Shel ________________________________ From: albiaicehouse To: