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Re: A short story for your critique.

dave_n2chi — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 22:50:00 GMT

George, That was exhausting-ly good! It kicked right off and never let go! Great stuff! Dave

Re: Bit of Bush, Robbo: Robbo: Piece and Good Will.

Amy Rissna Thompson — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 22:48:45 GMT

Please remind Robbo that the names of his too latest groups have changed. Grin, Amy. Amy ________________________________ De: Bernard d

Re: What I Want To Know. (Lamoreux)

Jim Lamoreux — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 22:48:17 GMT

... Lovely poem with a good message. Best, Amy. Amy De: Jim Lamoreux Para: ticket2write@yahoogroups.com Enviado: sáb, noviembre 7,

Re: What I Want To Know. (Lamoreux)

Jim Lamoreux — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 22:48:15 GMT

... discussing that in writing class just the other day. I understand what you're talking about. I may address that in following revisions. Jim, That is really

Re: What I Want To Know. (Lamoreux)

Jim Lamoreux — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 22:48:02 GMT

... needs to be easy to read. This is only the second draft. I may pare it down even more in subsequent drafts. Thanks for showing me where to look. Jim, This

Re: Critque requested please

Jim Lamoreux — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 22:47:04 GMT

... happens to the man with the heart attack. I wonder though what type of wall therer is that when it collapses on someone they roll out of sight? Hi to all,

Re: A short story for your critique.

Jim Lamoreux — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 22:46:09 GMT

... Other Short Stories") I am drawn to stories like this. The only places that drew a question for me were the pretty bank teller saying something like "He

Re: What I Want To Know. (Lamoreux)

Jim Lamoreux — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 22:46:06 GMT

... don't operate on the same standards. J. M., Suggie: I think the poem could do without "to support most families" near the end. The Import of Subject Work:

Re: A short story for your critique.(Gearge 39370)

damnnamething2001 — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 21:00:47 GMT

Hi Wings Your kind words are much appreciated. I write very few short stories, and perhaps the reason for that is that I only write when the germ of an idea

Bit of Bush, Robbo: Robbo: Piece and Good Will.

Bernard d — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 11:48:38 GMT

Robbo: Piece and Good Will. BE THERE, PEACE ON EARTH, GOOD WILL TO ALL! Ol' Robbo cringed when he heard that rousing Yuletide call. "Peace??Peace?" he

Re: A short story for your critique.

damnnamething2001 — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 11:45:58 GMT

lol Thanks. Sort of creeps up on you doesn't it? lol

Re: A short story for your critique.(Gearge 39370)

wings081 — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 10:47:06 GMT

Hi George I must confess that I read Suzianne's critique of sick,sick,sik, before reading your backwoods tale. When I returned to your submission I was

Re: A short story for your critique.

Susan Donahue — Sun, 08 Nov 2009 23:19:21 GMT

Dear George: Bravo! This is a gem. Sick, sick, sick and fabulous. Suzianne

A short story for your critique.

damnnamething2001 — Sun, 08 Nov 2009 18:06:31 GMT

Shave and a haircut By: George S A swirling cloud of dust and gravel flew up for fifty yards behind the silver Taurus sedan as it sped down Creelyville Road,

Re: What I Want To Know. (Lamoreux)

albiaicehouse — Sun, 08 Nov 2009 09:48:15 GMT

J. M., Suggie: I think the poem could do without "to support most families" near the end. The Import of Subject Work: Thanks for the reminder. Thanks for